Amusing
This is EXACTLY why I haven't eaten cereal in a month! The guy before me was right, though. The voice transitions were a bit too slow. Other than that, very entertaining. Good job.
Author Comments
The only way to tell if something is good is to post it on NG
I want to see if it is good enough for you people, I know NG is a tough audience to please. So vote fair and make or break my day.
common
common I know this can be better i have to say you put the pauses between each person speaking were ether to short or to long you need to find a perfect median and secondly well it just wasn't very good you need to define the different characters voices mr.announce and timmy sounded almost the same so just try and twik it a bit and make it better
Awesome
One of your best, my man.
BREAKFAST CEREAL!!!!!!!!!!!
You have to admit this is a cool idea.
Now the animation and voice over were pretty lame (I did like the hand drawn film imperfections, however) but the idea of scientists creating a super chemical that addicts us to cereal could only be made better by following it up with the idea that the cereal then comes to life. The cloning and genetic enhancements are frosting on this satire cake. Is somebody angry about GM corn??
uhm sorry pal but im very neuteral on this one
it was funny and the style was really unique but the voices and the sound was fairly annoying especially the voice that said 'end'.so i dunno it was ok but kinda annoying just work on the voices and the sounds
Jarf responds:
Thanks for that I personally thought the END just added icing to the cake. But everyone to their own opinion and it's good to hear people that can say they didnt enjoy something and still have a decent concious about what they are writing.