Loved the proverb. Hey, you actually made that relevant to the plot. Chuck E Cheese's must set some record for most parodied restaurant. I like the animation. I like how it shows their faces and lips moving. Melvin is easily the best character.
He's by far the most socially awkward. Dang, that's a weird way to wet your pants. I like how it all comes full circle. You know, the stuff with the crow.