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^^Good Points^^
It was actually kind of funny towards the end. It was unexpected that he tried to pierce his testicles, and the falling down at the end was pretty funny.
^^Needs Improving^^
The voices sound like they are coming out of an old radio, so work on that. Also, could use some more zoomed in scenes, just to give this a more interesting look to it. Also, a preloader is always nice to have.