Hope you like it. You all seem to be asking what is happening. The boy is sleeping, then he goes outside of his house and starts crying because it is on fire. You see the bad smiling, and then the good guy puts on his suit and runs to the forest.
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first off it gets a 5 for humor because I am laughing at your lack of originality. Did you pick up an white rappers cd and thought it would be cool to have him sorta, but not really produce your trash? There is no story line, least that I could follow. I read what you said was supposed to be happening, but, uh, wtf is this crap?
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we're those people boning in the beggining. i think that's the only thig I caught in the whole story. needs improvment.
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I have no idea what happened there... almost gave me a seizure.
mmmmmm
Some good old fashioned randomness....ahhhh.
what the hell....
waz that about b/c i have no clue. someone havin' sex, a boy, a burnin' building, an' old guy, and a ninja. but not a friggin' word. wth was that about.