British English isn't the problem.

The spelling and grammatical errors in question have nothing to do with British versus American English. I see and use both...this isn't "colored" versus "coloured". One of the words on the soldier/bear caption I couldn't even decipher. The grammar problems were relatively simple...you use mostly proper English, which is appreciated, believe me. Just add some apostrophes--"can't" not "can't"--and remember that "you're," not "your," is short for "you are." I do like text-based games, though, and am interested in seeing the full version. :)

Spell Check??

It's an interesting game but it's hard to go through with so many spelling errors. It really draws away from the game.

Some nice ideas

This needs to be tested more thoroughly. For example, the buttons can be multi-clicked and the text stops fading.

I was able to pick up the wallet twice.

You have definitely got skills, though - keep developing this game!

I mean really, WTF is this shit?

I can't even see the bear when I attack it. I don't see anything anywhere I go besides the grass. I re-loaded it about 13 exactly, even changed internet settings. So i'm thinking you flash has to many problems. You should improve it by adding graphics, less chatter, less grass, and more action. Try to actually put in the pictures or animations, or something. (like the "invisible" bear)

Sorry but I'm going with 1R.

boring

add some jazzy detective music.this has a lot of spelling errors too,among others things...like,I'm not sure if you wanted me to do things in any particular order in that game..cause I found a wallet,got attacked by a bear,found an alleyway and then it ended.confusing.It could also use some visuals,even if they don't move.It has potential though,I like your "load game" idea.