Hilariously Needy
It would be Sweetness, if only there was more sound effects, music and voices. Mayb a little longer with more too it. I definitely see where its going though... nowhere. Which makes it even more funny.
Author Comments
It's an odd day in Corktown, and even though everything seems to be unraveling, the mayor does his best to calm his citizens.
Points for effort.
That wasnt very impressive, but it certainly wasnt terrible. A second attempt and a better story would serve it well.
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It looks like you put quite a bit of time, if not effort, into making this.
good idea
crap story. i say go try again.
robototron responds:
Yeah, I think I might. Thanks for the review.
"yawn"
"snores"..."googawk" "yawn" well im done sleeping..so what was the story about? oh i forgot oh well.."walks away with a gun in his pocket"..
robototron responds:
I know, it was such a LONG and COMPLEX story!!! I mean, it clocks in at nearly EIGHTY seconds!
actually, by reading your review, I can tell you probably have a decent sense of humor. Why not watch it again (and listen closer)? You might actually like it.
Man...
Okay, we now know you can use a digial camera.
robototron responds:
It's true! I can!
..'Cept, this wasn't done on digital.
But nice review, champ!