not too bad
i like how you can skip around to different parts.
or can you? i didn't try.
anyways your voice needs a little work. you're accentuating your Bs and Ps too much, and you're talking too close to the mic as well, so try talking farther away from the mic, while speaking slightly louder. that always works for me.
anyways your tutorial didn't help at all >:(
......naw im just saying that cuz i knwo all that stuff already.
im mean.