Err, an intro? wheres the programme?
Feedback from CoolAddz
The animation had a slow pace, it had the lack of originality. Shadow moved his mouth but no words came out? Like the messy line background it suited with shadow (the charater) however the sky could be work on. The emerald wasn't bad but you should add reflection marks to show it's clean surface. If this was an intro wheres the main programme? This is not an intro, this is more of a trailer (highlights IN THE PROGRAMME) or a teaser (highlights of the programme)
There's a big difference between a trailer and a teaser.
Final comment
Nice work but sonic animation isn't new and you have wasted your time making it, you should have used your talents to construte your own animations. It's not a problem, you could use sonic for a starting point (inspiration) in your deveolpment of your new charaters but try not to copy it. Graphics of it was good, i would have given you a 7 but your originality was poor, so i reduced it to 4.
Love you lots,
CoolAddz
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