((( CUTE FLASH )))
Haha well it was a cute flash witha funny joke, what stood out most was the cool character designs, what hurt it the most was the robot like voices, but still a funny short...
~X~
Author Comments
i didnt have anyone to do voices so i just used textaloud, i know its short but if it gets blammed i will make it longer .. if u have any ?'s or just wannt tlk e-mail me at wowy99@hotmail.com :)
hey.
atleast they weren't clocks.
ok .. nice try ..
But DEFINATELY not the stuff i want on frontpage,
so i gave it a 0. Definately not good enough, try harder next time, ok?
wowy88 responds:
it never was ment to be on front page
no no no
this sucked sorry. :P
-SSC
Good graphics but...
the voices are the downfall of this cartoon. If you made the cartoon longer with more jokes in it and put different shots of the people sitting at the bar that would help as well. Just watch some TV (do I really need to tell you to do that) and see how many times they change camera angles in a cartoon or a sitcom.
You have potential, keep working at it.