i really don't like submitting previews/bits of my movie b4 im done but ive been working hard on this and i just wanted to submit what ive done and i just want reviews on some ideas for an ending or what i need to improve...ENJOY!
Let's see...
I mean, this was short, and there was like no end. You could have made something like he destroys the Toy shop or anything... The drawings were simple and original, but you can surely animate the whole stuff better.
5/10 --> You know...
Source : FBI
Too rough
Okay, I don't like paragraphes, so here we go:
1) It was too short. It lasted long enough for a minor giggle, but c'mon man, that had potential.
2) It needed sound effects. The song was okay, I guess, but it fit the video.
3) Style, work on the look. Little DevilAngel guy has it, now just refine it, and do the same with the scenery, and it will be gold.
oh pales
for god safe you call this a movie?
if you redraw this movie maybe will
bell mutch better.
I hope my talk did't hurt you.
i beg you
to redraw that opening street scene
((( NOTBAD )))
Cool looking character with style, and his eyes are cool, the music was decent flowed along nice with the animatin, now this flash i could see as a funny little series, keep it up, hope to see more soon...
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