um...

it was predictable
too predictable.

((( HMMMMMM )))

Well it needs work, more originality, and take more time with thease, you could think up some really funny ones, it was ok though...

~X~

Somehow I saw the joke...

Yeah, it was disappointing.

no good mayn

no good

Just ok

Work on your sound, work on your ideas, and you will do great