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umm that wasnt funny to me try harder next time man

Pretty good.

I liked your skill with flash, but sadly, despite having good skills in animation you aren’t making anything with a plot, you’d go much further with a true storyline in your flash. Your graphical skills are impressive, I’d suggest you continue with flash all the way to your own series. But seemingly, you stuck to plot less shorts. Never the less, good luck in making flash in the future and I truly hope you will improve. Keep up the good work.

Also, you may want to consider adding normal music to the flash beside the sound effects, it would sure make things more…Casual and better, somewhat.

And now, we dramatically move to the boring statistics:

Graphics: 9, Well drawn, same applies to the animation. All you need now is a plot, a real plot to make sure your movies have a meaning and will me more popular for it.

Style: 1, It had some humor but overall it was stripped of plot and had no style in specific, I am forced to emphasize that a plot would really help.

Sound: 3, All it had was sound effects, unfortunately a movie of this kind is better of with at least some music, food for thought about next time.

Violence: 2, A ball struck the little living ball after he killed 3 other balls with a toxic fart. Violent? Not sure, borderline insanity? You bet your ass it is.

Interactivity: 3, A play button, which was about all, though as this was a meaningless short it didn’t need more, but after making 30 reviews today, I’m getting sick of play buttons, nothing personal.

Humor: 6, It has some random humor like the deadly fart and so on, but it needs actual humor, which for you will need a plot, hopefully is in progress.

Overall: 7, Not a bad overall movie, but you need to find a plot. But on the bright side, this review is the longest you got in this submission, so I will rant on. Just kidding, good luck.

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Youve got show and talent now you just need an actull flash. I mean this was kinda good but it could be way better. You kinda just drew and it did get reppitive. So thats what i think would make it better ill give it a four out of five.

anoying

ugh, u used that same whisping sound effect to much it got anoying after ahwile but overall good movie

that was cool

i really feel sorry for that head. looks like he has a lot of enemies. oh well. i liked it a lot