EDIT : Accidentally uploaded the first one, but it's fixed now. It's the second one.
You should watch the first one, but this one can stand alone if you allow some confusion... you can find the first one by copying and pasting this link into your address bar : http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/164080
It's really short, and will definately compliment watching this one, which is much longer and better animated (though, since it is only my SECOND flash animation EVER, I'll be the first to admit it has faults. :D A lot.)
Tell me what you think. :D
((( DECENT )))
Hmmm notbad the music was cool, i like the style of art abit stylish and different from what i normaly see, and you had some really good music choices, all the kind that i would use, some scenes went abit slow but still neat flash, keep it up...
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Interesting...but...
I like your art style..it's something new and different. Kinda sketchy..but I like it. Problem is the animation of it all though. It looks...half assed. You need to be more vigilant in your animation. Make it flow better. Put more detail into it. TRY HARDER!
And the music sets the mood well...but you need to throw sound in. It feels too bland without actual sound effects..
What was that?
That sucked! it was boring, the same story, and it was blury! what a dumb flash. I hated it! It was the worse flash ever! Oh and the music kept cutting off!
cool
it was cool, better than the first.
Erm....
It's not all that great, but I like your style man. It's better than I could do, I'll tell you that much. You just need a little more experience with Flash, that's all.