So I thought I would checkout this little Movie of yours seems like It does have some potential to go even further then it represents, It has some decent quality to it, has some clever points, has both weak and strong points. This was a really great song and I feel it fit the content, some of the art style could be cleaned up somehow, more shades and details would also help. I am thinking that with this prticular song you could have had more of some darker art color tones and whatnot, anyways nice flash here. Now here is another piece of flash that has some decent Potential you are a Visionary of this Industry in the way of bringing some good effort along with some nifty ideas to the screen.
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I Encourage more improvments and allow this to have more Exposure and it will effectively come out just right. You will make it to the top for sure, but before you do you may want to ad a few things aswell as make some changes and it will be all for a positive change so go with some changes. the art style could be cleaned up somehow, more shades and details would also help.