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Red Moon Sage: Ep01

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Well, this is the final project I had for my flash classes. Two weeks to work on it, and it had to be like 40 secs long the most(still, it lasts like 1:15, hehe). So, hope you like it. This is my fourth animation. XD

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the history ''smell'' like good

yeh...good but he hero have small small eys an the song and tvoices but good job !

Not bad kid

good job! but yeah, might wanna add some more music. I loved the treetops though, great job with that!! hope to see more.

Pretty Good

Only Problem was that Sonig...from FF

u keeped on playing it over and over...it started to get on my nerves..or thean that..

everything else wasa great...
...ehh...nvm

Not that great.

I got nothing from this, very bland, here are a few sujections.

1) Rotate your music a little bit. Yes, Liberi Fatali is cool but it isn't for every scene.

2) Improve on the script, the diologe was a little weak, try spicing it up a bit.

3) No matter how sharp it is, a throwing star won't free a head, it simplly isn't wide enough to cover the whole neck, esspecially that guy's.

4) Finally your movie wasn't very exciting visually. Try using more dinamic or interesting angles. This movie was over too fast without the visuals needed to gather enough interest for the squel.

Well

I haven't seen your other animations yet so I 'll take the word of the guy (maybe girl) before me.
I wanna suggest a few things since everyone (in my life) seems to react better with suggestions instead of just critics so here goes:

Why not toning the colour scheme a little bit darker? It gives a more dramatic feel (if you've noticed most movies lately both flash and box office) if ur aiming for that kinda thing, and I've noticed that the grass (grounds whatever) looked way too light (there are trees growing so there'll be alot of shadows of the trees which again gave you that dark feeling.
I dunno the situation where you record you're voice overs but give it a little MMPH! but maybe there's something that prevent u from doing that I dunno. But it's good for now, I like you're graphic style there r things needed to be changed but u'll get it along the way.

ZeroCartin responds:

Yea, maybe ur right. I'll mess around with the colors a bit, maybe i can get a different mood into this. Thanks for the encouragement man! XD

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Apr 20, 2004
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  • Daily 5th Place April 21, 2004