Good ending. Wasn't Disney-like, saying that they found people and lived happily ever after. I enjoyed the whole story and I really hope you make more of these. Certainly enjoyed, and a good read. I thank you.
better than most, fo shizzle
I like the art in your series, as well as the multiple boxes drawn within the same frame to denote various kinds of progress. Quite a nice use of story board skills. Your depiction of things that were "beautiful" and people that looked "untrustworthy" were well placed... nice use of visual stereotypes there.
You made a massive leap in between "innocent naive seeker" and "experienced sour hard-man" in a very short time. That, and thaddeus' marriage seem quite dysfunctional. Makes me wonder why they're even together or ever got that way. The story was quite nice in a progress sort of sense, but some of your executions were cheesy at best in the dialogue, not to mention out of place if not odd.
Overall = 10 for quality above my low bar of standard for NG flash
Much more than meets the eye...no really!
Excellent work on this. I don't know how many people saw it, but Thaddeus changed colors from blue to red. Reveals change in alignment? Change in attitude? He definitely suffered from a loss of hope, but why did he do what he did at the end? Seems like a tradgic fall almost Shakesperian in nature.
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That was just gay
It was just gay dude...It had like no point...One guy just bitches about life, and tries to kill people...I even thought he was a girl at the begining...That was just friken gay...