Good ending
Good ending. Wasn't Disney-like, saying that they found people and lived happily ever after. I enjoyed the whole story and I really hope you make more of these. Certainly enjoyed, and a good read. I thank you.
Author Comments
A family, separated from the rest of humanity finds a city underground. Illustrated graphic novel in flash.
Notes: 1. This is part Three of Three.
2. This is another one of my illustrated storybooks(this part alone is about 130 odd pages). Don't expect anything else or you will be disapointed. Also, I apologize for not condensing into 2 files(which would have been feasable with the 5mB limit), but my computer could not handle a much bigger file, and kept crashing, so I left it at three slightly smaller files.
3. Leave me questions and comments if you have any, and I will try to respond asap(although time has been limited a bit as of late).
better than most, fo shizzle
I like the art in your series, as well as the multiple boxes drawn within the same frame to denote various kinds of progress. Quite a nice use of story board skills. Your depiction of things that were "beautiful" and people that looked "untrustworthy" were well placed... nice use of visual stereotypes there.
You made a massive leap in between "innocent naive seeker" and "experienced sour hard-man" in a very short time. That, and thaddeus' marriage seem quite dysfunctional. Makes me wonder why they're even together or ever got that way. The story was quite nice in a progress sort of sense, but some of your executions were cheesy at best in the dialogue, not to mention out of place if not odd.
Overall = 10 for quality above my low bar of standard for NG flash
Much more than meets the eye...no really!
Excellent work on this. I don't know how many people saw it, but Thaddeus changed colors from blue to red. Reveals change in alignment? Change in attitude? He definitely suffered from a loss of hope, but why did he do what he did at the end? Seems like a tradgic fall almost Shakesperian in nature.
true dat
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That was just gay
It was just gay dude...It had like no point...One guy just bitches about life, and tries to kill people...I even thought he was a girl at the begining...That was just friken gay...
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Daily 5th Place April 8, 2004