meh
well it was alright, but you have room for improvement. keep working with flash, try out some new stuff, check out the audio portal too.
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NOTE: I made this around a year ago.
The first one is not up yet, because I made it around three years ago, and the animation, song, and layout as a whole was horrid. I need to remake it...but the basic backstory pertaining to the main character is up on the loading page.
UPDATE: I put in the original music I used for this piece, and upped the volume of the voice.
overall: it was not worth it
where "it" is the time it took you to do this animation. at least how i feel.
ok, sound: 1, i could only HEAR about a word or two of what he was saying.. and my volume was pretty high up.. propably becaquse of the strong music, if you would do a fade out when he was talking it would've been better.
graphics: 4, the graphics.. ok, first of all at every scene, there was only about 1 icture of anyone or thing on the screen.
and the violence was real bad, not in the good meaning of it.. >.>
nice try
Looks to me like you've tried hard at this, but i think you've tried to do something big while your skills still arent very good, do some more tuts and learn flash more before you try something this intense, or just play with different settings, because it looks like you need more practise
crap
crap
ok...
this movie waqs ok, but it could have been much better if i could understand what the Girl? Man? was saying. it was kind of fucked up in the regard. gj though, i liked it