This is my first completed cartoon, but i won't be my last. I'm experimenting with different animation techniques and I'm sure my next one will be just as good if not better.
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This is the second flash of yours that I have seen. I like them both, but there is just some room for improvement. I liked the establishing shots of the main character towards the beginning, but it needs work. When he faces the cyclops, I kind of wondered why he, the Cylcops looked the way he did. Have him have a neck and have more movements. Nice close-up shots, still-frame like. You really need to add more sound effects to highten your animation. Good luck.
Ryan
ok...
you should give the nija a better name than "evil alien",and make the graphics a little better
Great!
Well,this seems like a good teqnuiqe,so i hope you keep on with this one,good movie too,keep up the good work!
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((( NICE )))
Well notbad its cool, i like all the reds, and the figters looked good, could use some more detail but still good, i noticed it didnt really have a play button, i had to right click, anyways its a good start, hope to see more soon...
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Well....
True it wasnt bad.....considering it was your fist time...but the fight scenes were kinda dull...your graphics were pretty good though, so all i have to say is keep practicing