Good, however, needs some help with grammar, graphics, and animation, other than that,I loved it.
I can't wait to see the next episode of it! It was pure brilliance!!!
Everyone should watch this one! It should at least be in the top 10! .. Well.. in my opinion anyway
((( NICE STYLE )))
The art was awsome, very cool art style, nw if only more authors can do stuff like this, it did seem abit loud on the sound, but not that big of a problem, anyways nice work keep it up...
The tecjhnical side (art, music, etc.) is superb, but the thing yous eem to be lacking in is your plot and direction. There's good plot potential in this no doubt, but as I watch it there's just something lacking in the events. Nothing to truly catch my eye, not ot mention the one word at a time narrative was a little annoying. Aside from that, a damn good flash
nice graphics and nice music, but i didn't care all that much for the flash itself. i still give you a good score, review, and a 3 vote rating for your efforts and good music/graphics.