((( OK )))

Well it was ok, could use some more time, abit cofusing at times, the fights were kinda neat, the voices was abit hard to hear, fix up those things and it will be improved, nice effort though...

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it was ok

...but sometimes a bid slow like the scene whit the pc, and to bad i couldn't hear what the guy was saying. but it has potentail. just make the movie a bit faster.

not bad idea

but i dont get what its about the idea needs more explination to work asa a series

good premise, just needs work

1) make talking louder than the music.
2) fighting a little too choppy.
3) when drawing the tattoo, it's not so good, improve that.

some other small things, but good idea.