Your animating skills definitely improved throughout the series. The biggest fault was the animation is slow and laggy. The scenes where the main character is dodging bullets and flipping took so long that I wasn't sure if they were suppose to represent slow motion or not.
The audio was good, but the songs sounded compressed and a little foggy. The story wasn't anything new or exciting, but could become something somebody would come back to watch with a little fine tuning.
I see you never finished this and that you planned on coming back to the whole series to make it better. That's been quite a few years and your website is no longer a domain so I'm assuming that isn't a part of the plan anymore.
All in all, if you were to revamp this and do it over I bet it would turn out much better and I'd be willing to come watch it.
(I am now done completing icons for your submissions!)