well.....
not bad, but you still need a lot of improvement.
Author Comments
My Most Proudest Flash Ever.
I Havent Submited In About 5 months because i tooka Break and started practicing flash. this Movie is about a kid that gets picked on at school and one day decides to rebel agenst it. it took me about 3-4 weeks to make but i stoped for like 6 days in a row. So. Please enjoy. and it kinda starts off boring the first like 15 seconds.
-i think u all will see i Inprooved from Pumpkin Patch Land 3..lol.
Not Bad
The first thing that I noticed when I started watching this flash was that your drawings and animation were not very good. Despite that, it was a good flash because you had put a lot of effort into it and it wasnt just something you had done in half an hour. This is proof that a flash with poor graphics but an interesting story is much better than a flash with brilliant graphics, but it would bore you to death. Good job, and I can see you making great flash in the future.
hmmm.
Well, it makes me think twice about making fun of the real loser kids, but try having more understandable drawings of the background, and the school.
not bad.
its was good
GOOD job KAOS
walters fat
your message is so true
this one touched me in places where if my girlfriend touched me I would be like thats nice