Pretty Decent
For those of you who don't know, I, Poryhedron, am the red and blue robot-like thing at the end. If you view my profile you'll see a Poryhedron that looks a bit different from the one in here, but there's a long story to that which has nothing to do with Bonzai's artistic skills.
This is looking pretty good as an intro to our "Pokémon Factory League" forum RPG. I'm looking forward to any future parts, and someday I might even try to learn Flash to make Poryhedron's origin. Maybe.