the dubbing itself wasnt bad, and i found some of what you said to be quite funny! hehe. 'that is a big turd' lol.
but i think that because the filesize was so small (in comparison to similar movies), i think that the graphical quality of the movie could have been better... you may have compressed it a little too much.
also, the quality of the speach you put in there could have been a little better.
but, the sound effects were great, and i wouldnt change those.
overall, a pretty good job, but the quality should be improved in some areas.
overall score: 5.5/10
(THE THUMB: slightly up)