Short but had a giggle
Author Comments
This is actually the beginning of the story. I know it took me a long time to make this one but I was very busy with other things. In my opinion, this one isn't as good as the first one I made, but I think if you enjoyed the first one, you will also enjoy this one! More to come, I promise!
hm...
Its not that bad for the first animaation,but its toooo short!!!!
Cute and random
For a first flash, it's ok. The graphics weren't very good and the animation was not very smooth, but it's not like it was completely terrible either. The one gag in the flash was actualy pretty funny, but the ending came out of nowhere and made no sense. Plus, why was this flash called doomed city? I figured it would have to do something about a city being doomed but i guess I was wrong. Keep working and you'll get better, actually I know you get better after looking at your other flash work.
hmmmm
I really don't even know what to say
Yeah...
I thought Doomed city, the original, was even better than that.
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2.85 / 5.00
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- Apr 6, 2001
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- Genre
- Comedy - Original