Well that was amusing, it was actually pretty funny It was a tad bit short and you may want to put a stop action code in there as there was a loop going here, but besides that it was actually ok, just make it longer next time. but for sure stop that loop lol.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try and fix that loop, this is an easy process with some simple action script code, its called a STOP-ACTION-CODE now you will also have to add a stop and replay buttons so that the viewer can easily replay you flash aswell, There a bunch of tutorial flashes on newgrounds that will easily show you how to do this, in the end it will only help your flash to run better and smoother. A short animation you have here, maybe abit too short I would say to improve on the flash as a whole either make this one longer with much more content or, add more shorts in here such as about 3-5 short short animatins that way it doesnt seem like a waste of one flash space and also you get more viewing for alot of your work instead of just one piece. just try some things and make it longer.
This is one funny animation dude!!! Cheers for the effort. Bravo!!!
Dude, i've seen your animations but this? There is absolutely no point in having this crap. A black sheep among your works i'll say.
Great graphics tho =P
it had no point
it would be funny if it had a point to it
Its a gotta see
Easy to understand, its a laugh when you see the ending.