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Ok

Well that was amusing, it was actually pretty funny It was a tad bit short and you may want to put a stop action code in there as there was a loop going here, but besides that it was actually ok, just make it longer next time. but for sure stop that loop lol.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try and fix that loop, this is an easy process with some simple action script code, its called a STOP-ACTION-CODE now you will also have to add a stop and replay buttons so that the viewer can easily replay you flash aswell, There a bunch of tutorial flashes on newgrounds that will easily show you how to do this, in the end it will only help your flash to run better and smoother. A short animation you have here, maybe abit too short I would say to improve on the flash as a whole either make this one longer with much more content or, add more shorts in here such as about 3-5 short short animatins that way it doesnt seem like a waste of one flash space and also you get more viewing for alot of your work instead of just one piece. just try some things and make it longer.

~X~



Hahaha...

This is one funny animation dude!!! Cheers for the effort. Bravo!!!



=.=

Dude, i've seen your animations but this? There is absolutely no point in having this crap. A black sheep among your works i'll say.

Great graphics tho =P



it had no point

it would be funny if it had a point to it



Its a gotta see

Easy to understand, its a laugh when you see the ending.


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Views
13,473
Votes
459
Score
3.28 / 5.00

Uploaded
Feb 4, 2004
9:47 AM EST
Genre
Comedy - Original