Nice film

Well it was more of a music video to showcase the great guitar playing in the backround, this was very interesting especially with the red and blacks comming forward you really made something dazzling, onlything you could really work on is the "ANIMATION" like limbs and arms instead of just sliding the objects over just an idea to think about. anyways nice job. Its not all the time that one comes across a flash submission like this one, its somewhat differant but has an exciting feel and touch here, As soon as this started it was something unique and differant ofcourse but thats more on the plus side of things. there is alot of Potential within this and I would love to see that excell to higher hights. So I will close out this one now but before I do, This submission yields lots of fun I do hope you keep this kind of flash up, because its pretty nifty if you ask me, This has some good design principles so keep up the nifty work its obvious that your endeavors here are paying off.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Animation could be better, like limbs and arms instead of just sliding the objects over just an idea to think about.

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Class of its own...

Great idea and great introduction. Really looking forward to the follow-ups. The sunset was just awesome with the weapons all stuck in the ground and the illustrations were all just so stylish. Red contrasting with black just so beautiful. Well done and keep improving.

I liked it, but I hope the music is better

At first I was realy intrigued, the suspensfull music was realy perfect for the part. But then you cut in out of no where with that guitar solo. OH that was terrible to go from calm mystery to rage like that I was quite taken back. don't get me wrong I like that style of guitar but it was so inapropriatly placed that it hurt to listen to.
I do however think that after a moment the guitar took upon itself the right mood the way you cut it in was not a good idea. but coodoes! I'm am very interested in this and hope to see more asap. It look very promising

Looks good...

I wanna see the finished version...that looks like fun...i loved the music the only thing is the transition between songs could be a bit more smoother...i didn't care for how they mixed together..kinda made it a lil bleh...but other than that i like the style and it looks interestion...keep it up.

OH and ignore Nutty behind me...he picked that movie apart like a freaking supreme pizza only he wanted a plain cheese...gosh..dude you need to lighten up!!! See their art in it.

Good idea

I liked the idea you had and it has potential, but I didn't really like how you did it. The graphics could of been a bit better, even for a flash this dark. The people in particular didn't really look proportional. I liked the text messages, but it could of been delivered a bit faster. There were times where nothing was going on in your flash. I'd add more narration. I would of also chosen a different song. As far as ninjas go, I thought they snuck up on people so as not to be seen. The guitar was a bit hard for the action. I'll watch the next installation though. Good Job.