huh?
dude, that was kinda gay...
sorry to say, it sucked...
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no blood, no potty jokes, just good old satire. this is the first installment of a series i am beginning about movng from new york to iowa. this isn't too far from what really happened at the the caucus i attended (though it wasn't at a farm). its also an excuse to finally use those fisher-price sets. please review: i really want feedback on this one.
Awesome!!!!!!!!
So original!!! From the beginning i knew its gonna rule!!!!
And guess what? It was better than i thought!!!!!
heyyy
haha pretty funny..if you live in iowa. IOWA PRIDE!<3
Hey...
I have most of those toys XD
Just one bit of advice:
The entire movie takes place from the point of view of one "camera." You can add a better visual dynamic by cutting to closeups, medium shots, etc. at key points in the narrative. Be sure to keep in mind the rule of thirds when composing your shots, and place the object of interest at different points on the thirds grid from cut to cut to change focus of the viewer.
That's it. Do that one thing and your movie will be way more interesting to watch. Everything else (voices, graphics, etc) was fine.
