ok i have some advice

when hes walking dont make him wobble make it like 3 shots each foot step

also make it seem more dramatic like violent when he got hit by the care he coulda rolled under the wheels

it takes a lot of patience tho

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Hmm i see that you are lacking something that other clay makers have i cant think of what it is but it is diffently different from others maybe that is a style you should keep and call your own

WoW

guess what?(me again) this is tight!i wish i could give you a 100 for style!(but i cant)(so go get run over by a parked car)

very cool!

i think its great that you're using clay, it adds great variety to the site. that was class, 'cept for the lack of background.

Good job =)

I've made a few claymations but i'm not really a vet.. Yet =P, anywho my sound is busted so i didnt get to hear the audio, the animation and comedy seemed good though