Needs more

Well its ok had some ok art but in some areas could have used more effort, i would suggest some file size reducing but other then that it was ok

Compress it somewhat

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hmm

well i see u didn't compress ur file size. also ur graphics for being hand drawn were pretty good. also u did good on the sound. keep up the good work and try harder to learn the rest of flash

What the fuck... why?

Why did you make this? What in the crap... I can't understand why you would do this. THeir is nothing even remotely OK in this movie. Well you used tweens so... rock on

ok

im going to go and watch the full version now.I hope that one is better.This was great,wonder how it could have gottn better then this!!!

Real promise

If this is just your third piece of work, you are doing extremely well. Very smooth, though the graphics still need a little work. Music background was excellent. Overall, nice job. I look forward to seeing future submissions of yours.