Notbad for a first

Well this was notbad for a first but i still think it needs more plot more ideas and needs to be longer aswell, but for sure give it much more plot and story, needs some depth, but again nice work for your first one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Here are a few things to reflect on, Amusing toon here these are just so short you should really think about adding these into a flash that has a lot of these short clips and with that it would create more of a quality submission, the one short clip just doesnt seem to cut it. The plot was simple and seems like it could use more depth more stuff going on more things to keep the viewer really interested in your movie, Give more info on characters, places, and when, these are something that could have more depth to them. just a few ideas there that could really make this work.

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not bad

it was an alright trailer... looked cool, now i'm going to check out the finished animation now.

Hey, cool movie guy!

And this cool movie is really your first flash? I really can´t believe!
I gave you a 5!

Strange Marc replied to his own movie...

Well as you guys said it was short...maybe to short?
So that's one of the things you need to improve for the first episode,and well it didn't tell you much something I feel miss since it's a trailer it should give you a treat of the movie.
But I'm looking forward for it guys!

that was strange.

That was weird,and really short too.Im looking forward to episode 2 though...