Sorry but this is REALLY bad... And you need to work on your spelling. Not really funny sorry.
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Pair Home Page : http://geocities.com/big3k2003/front
The first cartoon from Pair! This cartoon is not the best and I'm sorry about the typos (sported them after it was too late >_<) and sorrry about no music, I couldent find any that worked with it. Oh and the animations slightly crappy sorry but its not as bad as a lot of toons that dont get blamed!
YEA
Looking forward to episode 2! NOT. I LOVE your amazing jokes. Ha ha ha ha...
notbad
~~REVIEW~~
Well it was notbad but needs some "SOUND" and or sound/FX but other then that it was good
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add sound and or sound/fx
~~OVERALL~~
Decent but needs more
~X~
meh
the good:
it was somewhat funny.
the bad:
bad spelling, nos sound, no music.
the ugly:
put at least some background music in your flashes... and learn how to spell.
K
^^Good Points^^
For personal reasons I found the "Damn them all!" scenes pretty funny, not that they really are funny other than for my personal reasons.
^^Needs Improving^^
This movie is really quite lacking. The text has really bad grammar, which I'm usually don't care about, but it really makes things hard to understand. Because of this, I really had no idea what was going on and this just turned me off from the whole movie. You messed up from the beginning, so no bother commenting on the other problems!
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Turd of the Week January 21, 2004