better

you're getting closer, it's a little better than the first.

K

^^Good Points^^
You didn't do too bad of a job on the graphics in this. The animation was half decent at least. Some good sound as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
Definitely should have zoomed in a bit on this one, it was way too far away, which just makes it feel distant. The storyline wasn't that great. It was kind of original, but it wasn't funny at all.

Good... Very good...

Hey buddy! Thanks again for doing another die Mario, lol. I love your flashes, they tell N64/ whatever other G Cube playing SNES dude out there to make fun of Mario. Contract Sealed...

Sincerly,
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IT`S THE BEST

It´s even better than the first! It´s the best short that´s ever made! You MUST make more parts!

Hehehe...

He tries to reach the platform, but craps up the level instead. OMG ROFLM*O