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Jake the Foppy

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this is about a third of the whole cartoon...this is also my first ever flash...i'm pretty much learning as i go...so please be gentle...the rest of it should be pretty cool...i'll try and put them all into one cartoon...i just kinda wanted to see what everyone thought thus far...so thanks for any comments

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hmmm.

The music was the best part of it. Some advice for improvement:

- use sound effects (like punching sounds, there weren't any when Jake was fighting those orange things.)

- tighten up the graphics (I know your new at flash, but that's sort of a lame excuse.)

- spend more time on making other flashes (Seriously, if you spend an ungodly amount of time on making it they would probably turn out a lot better. Who knows, maybe you'd even get some NG award.)

- use voice actors if possible

That's all I can think of, just keep practicing and you'll surely get better.

((( COOL )))

Music was cool, the story was cool and moved along just fine, even the file size was not all that bad, still it was a good flash notbad at all...

~X~

old school graphics

lookin good Drumminjay.

yay

i love earthbound, im voting high just cas ive never before seen an earthbound flash cartoon here. it was a bit slow paced tho, i think it could have been sleeker

not bad

it wasn't bad, interesting story line, no voices and no action while the dialogue runs through doesn't bode well in my books. It could be much better. But I love to see little red and orange circles walk on their BALLS!

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Jan 14, 2004
10:09 PM EST