very cool
Author Comments
Well here it is... This is my second ever try at flash... This isnt really a movie though its an intro to a multigaming clan site. The last one i made had a fair few problems so i made a second one and i think its better but im back for some more constructive criticism. Sorry about the file size the last intro i got a lot of criticism about everything lol and all because i tried to reduce file size by cuttin stuff out. Anyway this time i have optimised everything to the best i posibly could have done.
Good as is
You simply used a good amount of pictures so that we don't see it repeating in the very first 5 secs but in the meantime you managed to keep it long enough to be impregnated and short enough not to be bored ... nice work
Over quickly but good use of the time
War is coming ... and this is a taste... unforgiving and brutal.
Good second attemt and the 7/11 footage is a masterstroke...
want to see the third one he tries to do
D3X responds:
Uhuh It isnt a series but im going to do a third one anyway. There are far too many problems with this one 2. The only real problem though is file size so i think im going to stray away from this style and find something a bit different.
okay...
but could be better, good try though
a suggestion...
some of the pictures were a bit distorted...and i noticed that the pictures kept on repeating. it would have been really cool if you would have had more pictures and the sequence never repeated....but i do realize it was hard. if its an intro to a site, it looks very intimidating.
D3X responds:
Obiously you didnt notice the filesize... I got as many pictures in there as possible. there are actually 48 different pictures in there and i had to optimise every single picture.
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