What????

Could do better with your voice in the begining

What was that?

Some tips........
-Okay, your graphics need help BADLY!!

-but most of all, PLAN OUT AND REHERSE YOUR LINES!! Its sounds so bad during the briefing, its like your making it up as you go along!!!!

-Dont give muffins a bad name, They make the world happy :P

poser

ugh this is MY idea, go see "muffins"

Now that...

...was sad. Very.

that was cool , but need more to keep interest

u should have givin more, i really hope u have a sequel to back that up, good job , ur doin fine