Nice so far

I know this is pretty much a test clip, but I'm sure it would look bitchin with color and especially sound. I'm looking forward to the finished product.

Umm...

Alots of things wrong with this.
1. ITS A TEST CLIP!! do the whole thing be4 setting it out on newgrounds
2. You need to add color
3. Sound too
4. not a problem, but graphics look pretty good for a 1st timer
Try to do better

Awsome

Can't wait to see the full one. will it have sound? overall its cool but could be better with sound.

Nothing new

What i just said... Nothing new

one word: Crap

This is crap because it's a test/clip shit. You shouldn't waste our time with crap like this until you develop it into a story or a game or something. With color and sound and something meaningful. If I want to look at animation sketches, I'd buy a flip book. Get it together.