You've really progressed!
Remember me? I fancied watching a flash by some author whose stuff I'd enjoiyed before and I was really surprised by how much you've advanced since I last saw your stuff.
The sketchy fbf art style was really nice (although the clock seemed a bit too 'perfect' for the style and the sun didn't blend in too well, being a solid colour).
Maybe for your next step forward, you could start making better use of varying line thickness to show off shadows?
The music was nice, and the ending theme started off great, but I wasn't too keen on the way it stopped and played the first 6 notes again and again.
The fading in of colour at the end was also really nice.
However, despite this being sweet on the eyes, the story lets it down somewhat as it's a bit unoriginal and we never are 100% sure of what's going on - why would the guy withstand a bullet to the heart, several more body shots, then be killed in an instant by the last bullet?
It just seemed as if he becamse superhuman for the 2nd half of the movie then lost his power. At least, that's what it seemed like to me.
I think if you combined the art style with some of your humour, it could be a great treat for us.
All in all, this was a lovely watch. Sweet on the eyes, and a fairly original style.