Why
Ok my great stuff cant get in, and this Craphole crap gets in. It was too fast, it made no sense, and it was not about DND also it was not sticks. It was poorly drawn characters.
Author Comments
There will be more episodes soon! DnD Stick Style is about a knight named Arlreth. He has very bad luck and he's very clumsy. This is my third flash movie.I think it's a lot better than my other ones...but that's my opinion.There's a slight problem with the music flowing over itself after the movie,but that doesn't matter.
Oldschool
A good start I'd say. I gave a high style mark since I kind of like that B&W 'oldschool' kind of feel.
The movie ran a bit too fast, and it dosn't have to loop i reckon.
Good start!
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Hmmmm well this needs alot more, like more color for one, and maybe some detailing of the characters ad some face features aswell, keep on flashing...
MOVIE COMMENTARY: Needs work, kinda bland...
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Needs work but shows potential
Need that bane of all, more frames.
Too jerky, too fast due to the lack of frames.
Good style though. You have a future in the stick figure industry.
One basic complaint, sound sux. Doesn't fit w/ the genre/story/action at all. Need to work on that.
SheepToaster responds:
I couldn't find any music,and I knew that without it,it'd get lower ratings,so I put in the closest thing I could get. Later I'll probably have music that changes.
Geh...
It was okay but could've been longer. I like where the story is going though, make more. Make the other ones longer though, with more comedy. Also when it was doing th _+_=_ thingy. I couldn't see it that fast, i only saw the last one. Make that abitt slower. Keep Trying.
SheepToaster responds:
Thanks,I'll try to make it slower next time.
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