slow...
slow action, long clip, butt ugly people
Author Comments
This is my second flash, I tried to make it more combat orientated, but i think i still need some work on fighting. I tried to be alot more detailed but like most men I can't draw woman for my life, so sorry in advance.
Update: Ok i think i should apologize for submiting this flash, I should have made it a little longer. The next one won't be rushed. Thanks for voting though.
Pretty good
Not bad for a second try. Try make it faster and shorter. I couldnt stand that long
toooooo slooooooow.....
Actually Nero,
Your flash is waaaayy too slow. Either that or just too long. The flash style you use looks to be a little dated (earlier ng stuff). If you were to make this thing any longer it would bore your audience to death. I would be a much more decent flash if you could pick up the pace a bit and not drag things out so much. The music was alright (was that Pantera?), but not too engaging for this sci-fi backdrop.
Honestly, this flash needs much more work. Speed it up, make it more engaging, and then lets see where you're at.
Keep it up !
-- SP
it was okay...
It was okay. The music was good. Better then I could do. The only problem I have with it is, it is way to slow. Its sort of boring to watch.
Yawn
Did anything actually happen whilst they were "fighting" atop a big-ass deformed drumstick? Thought not.
Not even remotely interesting
Good music though!!
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1.90 / 5.00
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- Dec 23, 2003
- 3:49 PM EST