I liked this, it was entertaining and did give me a smile so i was pleased with it, It did seem somewhat random but thats why i liked it.
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I thought it was fine but any flash can always be improved it looks prettygood sofar
A decent flash abit random, but i liked it
the ending monologue was actually kind of funny, I think that maybe the actual events taking place here were a bit more random than necessary, but you pulled it together alright. I think that there should have been a few follow up episodes though as I do see some potential in this series, even if this particular episoode isn;t as good as it could have been.
This episode was, well, interesting. It was a little slow to start, and it didn't flow very well, but after the kid built the snowman and you used the death ray, the flash got good. It was quite clever, using a death ray some something else besides world domination, and it ended up being a pretty cool flash to watch. IT would've been cool to see what other lessons this guy had.
Yeah that was a bit crap
The end to this was kinda funny with the Death rays need not only be used for world domination, but that aside it was kinda stupid, a professor guy blows up some kids snowman, it wasn't really good at all and it needed a lot of work.
It's not all that great, but it could be. You could stand to improve the graphics a bit, but that's not where the big problems lie:
1) Sound - there was very little of it. Maybe some background music or something next time?
2) Humour - I'm not advocating that you turn this into yet another blood-and-guts crapfest that seems to be popular here, but nobody can relate to a joke about death rays. Who can say that they find death rays a pressing concern to them? The best humour is the kind people can relate to, like the little known uses for a cigarette lighter, etc.