you FRIGGIN SERIOUS THAT SUCKS

Not bad

But way too short, you should add more after he says next

good idea

you had a good idea but it was way too short
you should have ran wit it like after when he says next a guy should be like im bomber man and blow himself up or somthing but you coulda done a lot more

SHIITTT

thats the biggest piece of shit on ng!

WTF?

What the feck was that!