ummm

kinda behind schedule on this hu?
oh and put some clips in

Less talk more movie

There was too much reading and it didnt flow to well.It also needed clips of animation from film itself.

ok, here i go

first of all, previews suck ass, becuase 9/10 of them never make a finish product. second, no one wants to sit there and read for 5 minutes, I mean, it wouldn't have been so bad if it was phrased on the page better, but you had it so it didn't flow well (swish and swift are supposed to be used in small doses, bro). And third, you can tell that all the dudes who voted high in the reviews were your buddies.

make a finished product, and I'll add you to my favorite authors list (if i see it)

this better have a point

i swear to god, if this trailer is a prequel to a really shitty flash mod's, i will not rest until i have blammed you from newgrounds... but, it was cool... only thing i can say, if i wanted to read, i'd have gotten a damn book...

hey

less talkie and more movie. I don't understand why you even need to sumbit this so soon before the movie.