Text could be bigger
If the text was larger it would be easier to read.
Author Comments
Yeah ok, i decided to make the first animation i did, a dud. And this one is going to be the first episode to the "Zero Saga" Series, So enjoy.
Alright i didn't have enough time to finish everything, sound wise. I need voice talent heh. Anyone who can remotely sound Cool, yet thugish, kinda like what Zero portrays. Thanks for watching.
Why so small?
Your text moved too quick, I was barely able to catch everything. Also, your story had no setup... even some text in the preloader would have been helpful. Without better staying power for this series... I'm worried this submission won't stand up to the other MM flash tributes...
D-Spec responds:
Well seeing as how you have the reading skill of a 3 year old, it understandable. I'll tell you what, you make a animation. Then come back to me and be a critic. Most of the people who write reviews, have actually done an animation or two.
Btw, it's not a MM flash tribute. It's a Zero flash tribute, hence the name "Zero Presaga." You need to learn how to read. Ohyeah, and if this is too much for your little brain to comprehend, then you can write another lame review telling me so. Have a nice day.
Good Spritework
Its short, but not bad. You got that music at the end from DBZ Legacy of Goku II, aint yah. But the rest iz not bad. Bravo
D-Spec responds:
Thankyou, it isn't from DBZ Legacy of Goku II though, it's from the beginning of Takiatsu or whatever the hell it's called, you know the new fighting DBZ game they have out. But thx for noticing.
needs more
i think i'd be able to give this more of a fair judgement if i could see it as a series. but i won't diss it completely.
on it's own, i think i'll vote a 3.
Paula
too fast
You need to give more time to read the text and this could go far.
D-Spec responds:
Sp-anks!
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