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YoshiIslandTheBabysitter

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Newb Crap :/

It has a fun concept yes, but poorly executed. Come back when you finish the sixth grade please, the spelling is annoying. Also, the intro takes too long...zzz...
Anyone can make a good movie, but first they have to put the required effort into this. Sadly, this movie could use more effort.

well letz c here

It didnt make much sense.You could have explanied more of the ploit.The custom drawings were at best to say Mediocre. but its okay i guess.

try again

ugh.... -_-

I think that this would have been good if you made it longer and explained what each of the things meant. Like: Peach should have come home, Mario should have found a way out of Yoshi's stomach, Mario should of found a mushroom in order to get bigger, and things like that. Also, please spell check. If you peole want us and others to enjoy your work...please spell "iam" like "I am" and "ill" like "i'll"

other wise, I kind of liked the plot in a way, but Yoshi is getting pretty boring.

SoCo12

*Yawn* Oh joy! ANOTHER Yoshi movie

There were too many added elements to Yoshi's Island themes that were just too obvious to not hurt your score.

I give you a LOT of credit for acknowledging those sprites were from a pack. No one seems to do that lately...

Too many elements were recycled. The hanging Mario was stupid and never even appeared in your real movie. The '5 mintues later' and 'and then something happened' stuff was overdone and didn't help with the scene transitions. The ending didn't make any sense. In all, not a bad movie, and your score is so low because its recycled themes and humor. Originality goes far in my reviews.

Nothing Special

The problem with this movie is that addition of flash created images to the sprites is far too obvious througout - it didn't feel like it was a real 'mario world'.

Plus, your spelling/sentance construction at places could use some work.

Breaking of scenes with sections such as '5 minutes later' can be superb for a laugh - there are certain jokes that work better when imagined rather than seen, but you did this at EVERY scene transition. And the line 'Then something happened' was simply woeful.

I think you had the basis of a good story, it just needs a better presentation, and possibly a firmer ending, something addressing yoshi still being alive in his stomach, will he ever escape? etc.

ABOVE ALL - please dont use library buttons!!!

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Views
2,591
Votes
15
Score
2.73 / 5.00

Uploaded
Dec 12, 2003
2:15 AM EST