To be an intro, it looks quite fluid and very solid indeed!!!

Good work really fast paced solid intro too

K

^^Good Points^^
Nice intro you have here. The graphics in this are a lot better than those in the previous two episodes of this series. Nice backgrounds and pretty smooth animation. Good music as well.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't see why the intro comes unaccompanied by any real addition to the series. It's rather silly to me, but nonetheless, still a decent intro.

Good intro.

Even for an intro its still very short, I would have liked to see more and to have known more of what to expect in later episodes.
It looks like a decent story, just needs more info and structure.

Looks good though.

Great!

This series kicks ass,you couldv made it a lot longer than it is though,anyways,keep up the good work!Its kind of short though.

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