hmmm

work on the freaking graphics man cause if you do this could be really good. Everytime he picks something up it looks like he is holding it with his hand backwards. Whats up with that?

good god....

this sucked. that "water cooler" was 2-d! skewing stuff doesnt help. also, the idea really sucked. a guy wearing a gas mask "infiltrates" a place, gets a pimp stick, blah blah blah....it just sucked.

eh...

Decent and funny until Strawberry Clock showed. Artwork and animation need work, but the scripting ain't bad.

((( OK )))

Well it was getting good untill i saw a clock, anyways i thaught you really had somthing here, ohwell whatever floats your boat, good character, i like the idea of a pimp stick you should have used it so magic comes out or somthing, and maybe add some more detail in the backround, overall it was a good start, could lose a character in there though...

MOVIE COMMENTARY: Good start...

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funny

Well this was a pretty funny movie. A nice idea to tie both violence and humor in a flash movie. Also this movie had some radical music and pretty solid animations. The graphics neede some touch ups but this was a short film with some small humor and violence overall a good running seris.