I'm not exactly a poetry connesuir.

I'm not big fan of poetry, but this seems alright. Needless to say, I do have trouble understanding it, but as someone said to me along the likes of "Real genius is not meant to be understood" or something of it.

The pictures don't make sense, but I'd assume they're something to reflect on; reflting on apperances? After that there's nothing to say, but the music. It's alright when it's hushed down, but now that I've typed this and the flash is still playing, it's getting downright annoying.

I guess it's only supposed to go with the beggning to a little bit after the end of the flash, but still. When it makes those high noises at times, it's just plain annoying.

keep it up

wow... a thoughtful, mature, touching, and unexpected surprise.

original

this is very original i like but i think other people won't like it

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Not very appealing to me, but for someone who likes poetry a lot, you wouldve done a good job. I didnt like the dirty cut of the looping music, it dropped a couple points for the sound. Violence wasnt graded.. Id try and make the movie have more fung-shway or whatever you call it in it..

Not my type, but i cant hold that aggainst you.

Im not one for poetry, so i suppose others would see something in it which i dont. The fading is nice, but id say it needs more.....but again, its poetry so i suppose you couldnt really add anything......confusing.
Its your own style and i would word for some ppl.
Not me.
Kepp it up.