i really like the menu so i hope you gonna like it DuDe...
Looks good
Now here you have some refreshing splash of ideas and you have even brought fourth some nice elements aswell also bringing some fun excitement Hey that looks good, i dont know if arrow keys would be the best way to go it seemed abit glichie, but i like the story and looks like a good game with all the interactive style, hope to see more soon
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Stick figures are the worst form of graphics. You should flesh out your figures. Spend more time and effort on your graphics and your submissions in general.
spend more time on this.
too short, needs more options, needs more explanation of what the hell just happened, needs to explain why hes in jail, needs better grammer and a note to everybody reading this i am very partial to weird stick animation style and if you dont like that style than it gets a 1 for style instead of a 10.
Needs more time
You can see that youve spent a lot of time making this but you need to improve things like simple spelling errors, out of place writing, things like that, its a decent engine, but at the moment it looks noobish.
yeah i know, every single flash game/movie i uploaded on newgrounds = when i was a noob at flash ^_^ but i barely upload any of them anymore i started to go youtube instead ^_^
Cool...
Make the other one, this is a cool series, but this was too short.
i know.. it was really really short.. and the next one i have made.. Had been deleted on my comp... So maybe someday i make the next one..