PROS: Over all it seems to be a mysterious flash and the music fitted this mysterious atmosphere. There seems to be real serious dialog in this flash, and that shows this is going to be a serious flash project.
CONS: This flash had very bland colors in its back round and surrounding . The character design wasn't very detailed at all. Maybe you should add some shadow effects.
OVERALL: It looks like a promising flash in the future but you need to work on your character design and maybe add some more detail, because your character right now looks boring and plain.